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^#1 Posted September 03, 2011 at 11:57:54 PM

base:

Chop:

comments are welcome ...

EDITED 2#

Post edited September 05, 2011 at 08:43:04 AM by Peterproductions

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^#2 Posted September 04, 2011 at 03:30:34 AM

The idea is not bad, but bg is off, the colour doesnt look real, and the rear rims is flat, fix that, make an update

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^#3 Posted September 04, 2011 at 08:34:56 PM

EduSport wrote:

The idea is not bad, but bg is off, the colour doesnt look real, and the rear rims is flat, fix that, make an update

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^#4 Posted September 05, 2011 at 12:17:01 AM (Voted: 6.00 stars)

I love the idea - i really do

However there are still some issues
->The paint looks a little fake - this is because it's very hard to colour a silver car - the paint just doesn't look shiny enough now

->The wheels look to be very low in quality and the centre of the front wheel isn't in the middle like it should be

->The perspective on the bg is a little too much for this car, you need a flatter angle then it will fit better.
Other than that not a bad try

Keep it up

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^#5 Posted September 05, 2011 at 12:23:05 AM

ok friend
I will try to modify these aspects ...
and later post the outcome ...
I like the background but not for this car!
the color was really too bright, it has to be something more sober!

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