I know you really want to be pro and I think you really deserve it, that brushing is just amazing dude!

BUT! I did manage to spot a few mistakes just to stop you


Just be careful with the small details in your future work and you can definitely be pro, your brushing and ideas are very good

Ok mate, I'll be extra carefull in my next chop
glad to ear your opinion, and happy that you liked the chop
thanks