I honestly do think it looks great, but with the much potential you have, I would have brushed a mad kit for it too. You have definitely improved over the years, I remember when I was better than you... not so much now eh? LOL. You don't belong in here, with this you've shown your skills and I say with this type of work, won't be long before your advanced.
Some tiny mistakes on this chop, but I am not going to mention them as I am overwhelmed with the details. Congrats.
P.S. Promote him now or I'll eat the Autemo Staffs legs

oj lol