rich wrote:
i think you ment japanese style ??
yeah deffinitly JDM influenced, i like what you did with the front bumper, subtle and simple but do make a difference, the exhaust seem a bit low res to the rest of the chop but i guess your limited on side pipes like that to use. also perspective/angle wise the background fits excellent, and the shadow under the car is really good.
execution is ok, you got great ideas and potential mate, just take more care to go over it and check its truely finished (everyone can forget the background in the windows and silly little thingsfrom time to time, like ive even put a eyebrow on one headlight, and forgot to do the other! lol) but a good "proof read" will jog your memory, and show up mistakes that are easy to fix. another thing, i think you got away with it this time, but i think you used the same wheel twice, not only do car wheels never rest at the same angle, the second copy of the wheel will always be off angle, and trying to correct it will leave it looking flat, sometimes like here you will be lucky, but dont get into the habit of using them all the time, like i said they rarely work. take all this info in a nice way, and the same from other choppers, and practice what they tell you, you will improve very fast and and well if you listen to your peers.