lotus exige scura by: ToMiii

well it has been a while since i finished a chop, so i thought that i for once would finish one! almost everything on the body is brushed and the only thing that is C/P is the rims, hope you like it and comment please! :)



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Post edited March 18, 2010 at 03:24:55 AM by ToMiii
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Nice work man :D Keep it up :D
Nice work mate! You have improved alot in a short time! brushing looks great! a few faults tho, since the rearlights is on I think that you should se some lights on the ground in front of the car too (from the frontlights), carbon looks good, but it seems odd to me that only a part of the "blade" on the rear wing is in carbon fibre and not the rest, i think it was something more but cant remember right now, u know why....
Great brush as said, really nice rims suits awesome! great work mate!
Keep it up :-d
Looks great mate!
* The side windows looks abit flat, it could use some lightning.
* At the Rear the carbon is too bright compared to the other brush, Could be fixed by erasing some of the carbon close to the "transaction" from the carbon to normal paint.
* Looks good overall, However i think it could use some small details.

I'd say Intermediate :-d
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nice soft but beatefull :-d
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Long time since I commented a chop, but this I feel obligated to do. hehe.

First, there are some more stuff C&Ped then the rims mate :P The airintake on the side, taillights, difffusor and mirrors. But never mind, I got that you meant that you brushed the main body of the car. The styling of the car is quite nice, even though you havn't done much, but the carbon back quarters and wing adds a little extra. As well as the flat paint. So overall all of that is good.

If we move over to quality. The brush is good but tooney, even though the paint is flat some more refs (blurred refs) would have been nice to fit the new bg. Also, since there is noise in the C&P parts you should have added some to the brushed areas as well in order to get them equivalent. You should also be more careful with your selections, there is a thinn line of the old bg all around the car, such a thing can really sink a chop, even though it is flawless otherwise.

But overall a nice brush, colors blend nice and such, nice atmosphere. Keep at it, and maybe make use of your friends to give you pointers before posting next time ;)
Cheers!
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Looks good.
Cleaning of the rear looks like you pulled smudge from left to right (i mean you can see the lines in same colour all along) but it doesnt look very bad or blurry or something. Just wouldve been nicer if it flowed better.
*ticks teh b0x*
Some lighting miscues but brushing is nice and atmosphere looks good

I think inter level :)
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Long time since I commented a chop, but this I feel obligated to do. hehe.

First, there are some more stuff C&Ped then the rims mate :P The airintake on the side, taillights, difffusor and mirrors. But never mind, I got that you meant that you brushed the main body of the car. The styling of the car is quite nice, even though you havn't done much, but the carbon back quarters and wing adds a little extra. As well as the flat paint. So overall all of that is good.

If we move over to quality. The brush is good but tooney, even though the paint is flat some more refs (blurred refs) would have been nice to fit the new bg. Also, since there is noise in the C&P parts you should have added some to the brushed areas as well in order to get them equivalent. You should also be more careful with your selections, there is a thinn line of the old bg all around the car, such a thing can really sink a chop, even though it is flawless otherwise.

But overall a nice brush, colors blend nice and such, nice atmosphere. Keep at it, and maybe make use of your friends to give you pointers before posting next time ;)
Cheers!


thanks m8, but i have to give you a little lesson, C/P means Copy/ Paste (if im not wrong haha), and i havent copied/ pasted any parts exept the rims. the lights, rear wiew mirrors and so on is from the original, but thanks for the critisism and i will put the things you said in mind! :-d
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Looks good.
Cleaning of the rear looks like you pulled smudge from left to right (i mean you can see the lines in same colour all along) but it doesnt look very bad or blurry or something. Just wouldve been nicer if it flowed better.
*ticks teh b0x*

i dont quite get what you mean, mind to take it more specific?:)
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