Golf 2
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seat and wheels are off
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please write friendlier comment, you are not better than andulyk23. THX 
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musimustang1370 wrote:
If you don't like the chop there must be reasons, please list them an so you can teach the chopper how to improve/ or at least let the artist know why you dont like it, or else dont post at all.
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andulyk23, good attempt, but:
-The car is too dark for the background, brighten up the car ( not the background)
-the rear wheels should be rotated counter clockwise a little bit.
-the reflection on the window has too much colour, try putting the cloud layer's blending mode to screen and lower the opacity.
-the white stripe on the background/ floor doesn't show on the car front bumper.
good work, keep chopping mate
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J_HUI wrote:
musimustang1370 wrote:
If you don't like the chop there must be reasons, please list them an so you can teach the chopper how to improve/ or at least let the artist know why you dont like it, or else dont post at all.
Unfriendly and repeat offense will lead you to a ban, please take note.
andulyk23, good attempt, but:
-The car is too dark for the background, brighten up the car ( not the background)
-the rear wheels should be rotated counter clockwise a little bit.
-the reflection on the window has too much colour, try putting the cloud layer's blending mode to screen and lower the opacity.
-the white stripe on the background/ floor doesn't show on the car front bumper.
good work, keep chopping mate
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It's a golf 1 not a golf 2
I agree with J_HUI here, you may also want to try rotating the seat anti-clockwise a bit too
You should also have the new background showing through the open window - look at the base, you can see trees through it. I think this would help a lot
As for the Ideas, I think they're pretty cool! The car has been cleaned well, and the styling choices are nice
The background fits well too, it's just the car needs to be a bit brighter
Overall a nice chop though, you keep on improving, so keep it up
I agree with J_HUI here, you may also want to try rotating the seat anti-clockwise a bit too
You should also have the new background showing through the open window - look at the base, you can see trees through it. I think this would help a lot
As for the Ideas, I think they're pretty cool! The car has been cleaned well, and the styling choices are nice
The background fits well too, it's just the car needs to be a bit brighter
Overall a nice chop though, you keep on improving, so keep it up
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As ATC said, it's a Golf 1 .
Anyway, good ideas but I must admit, that there are some good ideas- but there are some mistakes...
But anyway, everything else is done really well. Great work, and keep it up.
.Anyway, good ideas but I must admit, that there are some good ideas- but there are some mistakes...
- The wheels, they have to much positive camber, and they do not look right at all.
- The windscreen reflections aren't that good- if they were more faint and you could see the interior a little, it would be great.
- The roll cage doesn't seem to fit very well, it looks way to bright to be in the car. If it was darker, I think it would be better.
- The seat is at the wrong angle a little bit- it looks like it's rotated to much or in the wrong perspective.
But anyway, everything else is done really well. Great work, and keep it up
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