Good work on this one! The atmosphere is fantastic
Problems I see:
- Spotlights from headlights on ground are too small (and probably wouldn't be visible in such lighting conditions anyway)
- Lip of rear rim has way too much orange glow. I understand what you were trying to achieve but it's way over done
- The brushing is good, but the car seems to be lit equally from all angles. In a situation where the sun is setting, the right hand side of the car should be much brighter than the left which would be in shadow. I'd like to see you incorporate more shadowing in the areas which wouldn't be in direct sunlight.
What I like:
- The brushing otherwise is very good
- That sunset atmosphere is pulled off well
- The rim choice is sporty yet classy - good selection there
Keep up the good work, and good luck in the competition!
8/10
Post edited January 25, 2012 at 03:34:17 AM by Klaus
puszka321 wrote:
please video

MK211 wrote:
I really like the nos coming out of the rims